Some interesting ideas here Zainab. I would like to see more clearly how they link to the research into real music videos- as this is not explicit enough. For the case studies of real music videos, I would like to see much more detailed textual analysis of the techniques used in editing and camera, and a consideration of representation of star quality, sexuality etc.
You have now added some case studies of real music videos. Please embed this prezi to make it easily to look at. Case study 1- Very brief on how technical aspects such as camera and editing create meaning. Nothing on the role of her performance. You need to extend these useful notes, at this point they are just a starting point for further analysis. Also consider how the video helps you with your own ideas. Case study 2- again, much too brief. Little on the representation of the artist and no discussion of the meaning / connotations of those technical elements. Vanessa
Some interesting ideas here Zainab. I would like to see more clearly how they link to the research into real music videos- as this is not explicit enough. For the case studies of real music videos, I would like to see much more detailed textual analysis of the techniques used in editing and camera, and a consideration of representation of star quality, sexuality etc.
ReplyDeleteYou have now added some case studies of real music videos. Please embed this prezi to make it easily to look at.
ReplyDeleteCase study 1- Very brief on how technical aspects such as camera and editing create meaning. Nothing on the role of her performance. You need to extend these useful notes, at this point they are just a starting point for further analysis. Also consider how the video helps you with your own ideas.
Case study 2- again, much too brief. Little on the representation of the artist and no discussion of the meaning / connotations of those technical elements.
Vanessa