Audience feedback on Rough Cut

We screened the rough cut version of our music video to our class today to see if they had any feedback concerning what we could do to improve what he had already before we complete it. We were still working on transitions so we still had sharp cuts between each clip, the timeline was filled with footage with lip syncing in sync. We have planned to put text at the beginning which was inspired by our case studies and other music videos that our artist Drake has featured in. The sound of our video has a lot of echoing because the video audio had not been taken out as it was helping us to fit clips together in case anything came out of place, it also helped us as we mentioned that our actor was found last minute so he did not know the lyrics perfectly so we had to cut into some good clips and put in others to fill in the gaps. Some feedback that we were given was that our female actresses part was quite long, it was suggested that we increase the cutting rate to make it seem a little faster.